I have a third grader who has significant trouble when she's writing. Her ideas are all good, but it's almost as if she's thinking faster than she's writing. She'll take four or five ideas and write them all down as one sentence with many "and's". Not only that, but her ideas get mixed up within the "and's" as well. For example, she'll have a paragraph like this... (idea1 idea1 idea1 idea1) and (idea2 idea2 idea2 idea1) and (idea3 idea3 idea3 idea3 idea3) and (idea1) and (idea2) and (idea4 idea4...) Get the idea? We've talked about taking those ideas and making them each into their own sentences. We've used graphic organizers, but they only separate her ideas on the GO. When working one-on-one with her, she can write a decent paragraph with a bit of struggling, but when on her own it just isn't clicking. It's so frustrating for me to see this because she's a bright girl with good ideas, but she just can't get them down in a fluid paragraph. What can I do to help her?