I was hoping you could offer me some feedback on my updated resume. I'm a first year and I know that I still need to keep my student teaching information in my resume, which makes it hard to keep short. I would love it if you wouldn't mind loking it over and sounding off. Thanks everyone! PS~ The typing and format is messed up because of copying and pasting! Objective: To obtain the fourth grade long term substitute teaching position at Harriet Beecher Stowe Elementary School. Education: Westfield State College, Westfield, MA B.S.E. Elementary Education, May 2006 Academic Majors: Elementary Education and Liberal Studies (Spanish Concentration) Certification: Connecticut Initial License in Elementary Education K-6 (Endorsement 013) Expires 06/28/2009 Massachusetts Initial License in Elementary Education 1-6 Expires 07/10/2011 Teaching Experience: Long Term Substitute Teacher, Grade One Henry Barnard Elementary School, Enfield, CT Oct. 25, 2006- Feb. 16, 2007 Utilized the Enfield Public School System's curriculum in developing and teaching lessons. Maintained classroom rules and implemented rewards system to encourage appropriate behavior for effective classroom management. Met with parents, administrators, and other teachers frequently regarding behavior issues, curriculum, and academic progress. Per Diem Substitute Teacher Enfield Public Schools, Enfield, CT Oct. 2006- Present Implemented lesson plans and classroom management routines left by teacher. Instructed students of different grade levels in a variety of subjects. Undergraduate Teaching Experience: Practicum (Student Teaching Experience), Grade One Center School, Longmeadow, MA Jan. 2006- May 2006 Assumed all responsibilities of cooperating practitioner. Responsible for developing lesson plans in accordance with the curriculum of the Longmeadow Public School System. Utilized classroom management techniques in maintaining an effective learning environment. Literacy Instruction for English Language Learners Apprenticeship, Grade Two Highland Elementary School, Westfield, MA Oct. 2005- Dec. 2005 Developed literacy lessons for an ELL student. Administered the DRA regularly to assess student learning. Utilized literacy instruction and assessment techniques in tutoring an ELL student. Prepracticum, Grade Three Sumner Avenue Elementary School, Springfield, MA Feb. 2005- May 2005 Developed and taught a habitat unit, including the organization of a field trip. Assisted cooperating practitioner with classroom management and administrative duties. Lead reading groups in daily literacy lessons. Prepracticum, Grade Four Southampton Road School, Westfield, MA Oct. 2004- Dec. 2004 Developed and taught three lessons in accordance with the curriculum of the Westfield Public School System. Assisted cooperating practitioner with administrative duties. Related Activities: SNEA/ SEAM Member (2002-2006) Attended "What Every Future Teacher Needs to Know" Conference (2005) Literacy Volunteers of America Tutor (2002-2003) Holy Family Church CCD Teacher (2002-2003) Enfield Public Library After School Program Tutor (2002) NHS Member (2001-2002) Other Work Experience: Head Cashier, Big Y World Class Market, Enfield, CT Jan. 2001- Present Responsible for supervising and managing employees working on the front end of the facility. Accountable for executing procedures efficiently and appropriately according to company policy. Responsible for training cashiers and service desk associates in all aspects of the positions. Its 2 pages long. Thanks everyone! I have a LTS interview tomorrow, and REALLY want the position!