Please review my resume

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    Oct 28, 2014

    It says I need permission. You need the modify the settings under 'Share' so it is visible to anyone with the link.
     
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    Thanks. I should be open for people to view now.
     
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    Here's a few minor things (basically just editing) that I would change:

    *I don't know if I personally believe in objective statements because I personally don't think they're necessary (again personal opinion :) )

    *Change the word "gave" in "Gave lessons to to classes" to something like "Taught lessons..."

    *Experience #3 is missing an action verb. Change "Primary substitute" to something like "Served as a primary sub..."

    *Move #6 to the second page so it's not cut in half.

    *The dates for Student Teacher cut onto the next line. Move it to the first line.

    *Under coaching experience, the "High School" for Ping Pong club advisor isn't italicized. I also would move Travel Coach because it is out of chronological order.

    *Under Education, your Master's Degree date is not italicized.
     
  7. czacza

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    Get rid of the numbering

    Combine your student teaching

    Combine your subbing

    :2cents:
     
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    Combine your coaching
     
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    Yes, this too!
     
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    Great I will do that. I did work a job for two years where I worked at a city junior rec center (like a ymca). Should I include that?
     

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