my former VP for her to look over. She said it all looked great but too wordy! she said principals don't have time to read it. I spent weeks on redoing my simple resume that I had for 2 yrs - that looked like this: blah blah em school dates blah and blah em scho dates and went with the kind y'all suggested: blah blah em school dates *taught students phonics lessons *used guided reading blah and blach em school dates *tutored students in math *worked one on one *etc SO she said it's all too much!!! My cover letter was as y'all helped me write - giving a short, specific example of a lesson. I soooo give up! I just can't rewrite it again.