I am writing a proposal to our director general to change what foods are being sold in the cafeteria. I do not know the correct way to end the proposal. I will include my concluding paragraph and current ending. Thoughts? "In sum, our student population would be healthier, feel better, and have a higher cognitive function if we offered real, healthy food in the cafeteria as opposed to processed, sugary food. Those changes would likely be evident in student behavior and performance in the classroom (resulting in better attention and focus). Not only would we see enhancement in our students’ abilities, we would likely see the same improvement in the teachers’ abilities and performance as well. When a person feels great, he or she is capable of performing and producing incredible things. The possibilities of what our students and teachers could accomplish from this kind of lifestyle is limitless. What if feeling amazing every single day were a real possibility? What could we accomplish then? I ask that you consider this proposal for all the reasons listed above. Respectfully, Me"