Discussion in 'Job Seekers' started by Miss Walda, Nov 19, 2009.
Nov 19, 2009
Could I please have some feedback on my cover letter and resume?
Nov 20, 2009
Your cover letter seems a bit long. it seems more like a statement of your philsophy on education. I didn't even want to read it all, I could imagine how a principal would...
Nov 22, 2009
I agree....I lost interest in the first sentence....
~take the main ideas from each and bullet them
~these things will still stand out
~you will have the opportunity to make a bold point
~they will appreciate the fact that they don't have to read a lot
Thanks for the suggestions, I will try to make it a bit shorter. It is longer than a normal cover letter as the selection criteria need to be addressed in it.